Tuesday, July 14, 2009

Friendship-Corticotropin-releasing Hormone


I wanna make you smile whenever you're mad.
Carry you around when you are tired.
I am your shining armor
saving you from your nightmares.

Build you a new day everyday
Oh, it would be so nice if you just let me be.
Alzheimer's,hypoglycemia and Cushing's syndrome lay.

oh, I am corticotropin-releasing hormone
i control everything when you are under stress,
serves as a main regulating hormone when needs are pressed,
so let me stress...

I am corticotropin-releasing hormone
playing the central role in adaptation
My HPA activated within seconds
after exposure to acute stress.

I am corticotropin-releasing hormone
your true friend whom you can count on.


  1. can i know why the tite is friendship?

  2. i wanna know why did you entitle it friendship..
    but still..you explained your topic well in your poem..but i'm still looking for a more creative piece..

  3. Hello Apple,

    Nice try, some typos should be corrected. see me.

  4. apol it seems like you adopted a song to be a pattern of your poem. good. i wonder what if you sing it and put some dance steps too. haha.

  5. I agree with Eryll, this reminds me of 50 first dates.

    Keep writing.


  6. "I wanna make you smile whenever you're sad
    Carry you around when your arthritis is bad
    Oh all I wanna do is grow old with you..."

    aheheh.. (sounds like...) ahehe

    nice try apple..
    very creative..

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