Tuesday, July 14, 2009

Friendship-Corticotropin-releasing Hormone



Friendship


I wanna make you smile whenever you're mad.
Carry you around when you are tired.
I am your shining armor
saving you from your nightmares.

Build you a new day everyday
Oh, it would be so nice if you just let me be.
Alzheimer's,hypoglycemia and Cushing's syndrome lay.

oh, I am corticotropin-releasing hormone
i control everything when you are under stress,
serves as a main regulating hormone when needs are pressed,
so let me stress...

I am corticotropin-releasing hormone
playing the central role in adaptation
My HPA activated within seconds
after exposure to acute stress.

I am corticotropin-releasing hormone
your true friend whom you can count on.


7 comments:

  1. can i know why the tite is friendship?
    hehe.

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  2. i wanna know why did you entitle it friendship..
    but still..you explained your topic well in your poem..but i'm still looking for a more creative piece..

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  3. Hello Apple,

    Nice try, some typos should be corrected. see me.

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  4. apol it seems like you adopted a song to be a pattern of your poem. good. i wonder what if you sing it and put some dance steps too. haha.

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  5. I agree with Eryll, this reminds me of 50 first dates.

    Keep writing.

    Z

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  6. "I wanna make you smile whenever you're sad
    Carry you around when your arthritis is bad
    Oh all I wanna do is grow old with you..."

    aheheh.. (sounds like...) ahehe

    nice try apple..
    very creative..

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